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August 7, 2016
liii. by summeryates is a poem that is easy to relate to, with questions brimming just behind its words.
Featured by TheMaidenInBlack
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Literature Text

while i sit in my crumpled shirt,
naked legs and bleached underwear
i ponder about silence and solitude
along with the brotherhood they share
        they were the flat lines in heart monitors,
        the shooting stars that happen behind your back
        the budding flowers and sleeping children
                the world that happens while you sleep
                                and like the ticking of the clock
                                they bear a loneliness
                                that was either too loud or unnoticed
    AYE SOMETHING THAT WAS NOT WRITTEN IN THE PAST, WOO! This poem thing practically wrote itself, you know. It took like 10 minutes and everything i write either takes 10 minutes or 2 weeks so this is one of those 10 minute ones. Also I'm sick which is surprisingly a good motivator.
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thakitsune's avatar
My first comment fell into nothingness. I don't think that it's coming back. In short, I said that your words are stunning and that I particularly like the words "the shooting stars that happen behind your back." And then I told you that it was well done.